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Summer Silences

by Eva 040


Summer Silences.


Remember that night,
Under the summer sky,
Stolen by stars,
We lay immortal.

We stood against the world,
But it was too strong for us,
I don’t see you anymore,
Since the summer died.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

Now you’re a shadow,
In my mind,
Which disappears,
When I turn on the light,

And I can’t remember your face,
When it’s not in front of mine,
And I don’t like it, I don’t like it no.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

I can write all the songs in the world,
But they won’t bring you back.

I can watch the stars float in the sky,
But then I’ll just waste a night.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

A cigarette will kill the pain,
A different day that feels the same.

All I needs a guitar to keep me sane,
So I can play this song again.

If I could have another chance,
I wouldn’t let you go.

If I could see your face again,
I would let you know.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

you can hear the accoustic version on http://www.myspace.com/ourcursemusic and we'll be recording in april


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Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:55 pm
Eva 040 says...



i'm the guitarist and song writer (the one with the hair =P)

in april we'll be recording so hopefully be making something to put on youtube =]

thanks for the reviews, this songs like, real personal to me, and having other writers like it, thanks =D

well Angel of death, when we record, i'll find a way to send you it or something =]

Eva

XxXxX




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Fri Mar 13, 2009 3:00 pm
break~my~heart says...



this is beautiful!
you guys should post stuff on youtube too :D




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Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:51 am
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This song made me both smile and cry. It was beautiful and I can see myself listening to this on my I-pod. Are you apart of a band? I visited the link and the vocals were amazing. The guitar was perfect and wow!

Hope you guys make it and keep writing wonderful songs,

~Angel

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Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:29 am
bubblewrapped says...



Moved to the Lyric section for you. Lyric Poetry is slightly different :)

Cheers,
~bubbles





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