Summer Silences.
Remember that night,
Under the summer sky,
Stolen by stars,
We lay immortal.
We stood against the world,
But it was too strong for us,
I don’t see you anymore,
Since the summer died.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.
Now you’re a shadow,
In my mind,
Which disappears,
When I turn on the light,
And I can’t remember your face,
When it’s not in front of mine,
And I don’t like it, I don’t like it no.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.
I can write all the songs in the world,
But they won’t bring you back.
I can watch the stars float in the sky,
But then I’ll just waste a night.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.
A cigarette will kill the pain,
A different day that feels the same.
All I needs a guitar to keep me sane,
So I can play this song again.
If I could have another chance,
I wouldn’t let you go.
If I could see your face again,
I would let you know.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.
you can hear the accoustic version on http://www.myspace.com/ourcursemusic and we'll be recording in april
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i'm the guitarist and song writer (the one with the hair =P)
in april we'll be recording so hopefully be making something to put on youtube =]
thanks for the reviews, this songs like, real personal to me, and having other writers like it, thanks =D
well Angel of death, when we record, i'll find a way to send you it or something =]
Eva
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this is beautiful!
you guys should post stuff on youtube too
This song made me both smile and cry. It was beautiful and I can see myself listening to this on my I-pod. Are you apart of a band? I visited the link and the vocals were amazing. The guitar was perfect and wow!
Hope you guys make it and keep writing wonderful songs,
~Angel
*clicks gold star*
Moved to the Lyric section for you. Lyric Poetry is slightly different
Cheers,
~bubbles